All Comments on 'Brian and Kara - Their Parents'

But the story lacks erotic content mainly because the lack of detail in the sex acts

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Too many [named] characters to be followed. Confusion, not clarity.

Low rating because of character mass confusion and, most of all, the bit about 8 and 9 inch cocks and 36D tits. What is it with you new writers anyway? Can't you people write about normal people and NOT porn star equivalents?

Why do some want "true",stories all the time .This is fantasy time,and there are plenty of men with 9 inch cocks as there are women with 36dd tits.I have read several of your stories.What this needs as someone has already said is far more detail of the shagging action.I hope you write a part two

gave it fifty % Because . . .First I did this then I did that then they did it too.

DON'T RUSH! Liked the storyline, but the sex needs - you'll excuse the pun - fleshing out. The moms go in the room, have sex with their sons, and NOT ONE WORD about what happened. Same with the dads and daughters.

...do half way decent stories have to end as clusterfucks? Why not bring the Grandparents in on the orgy. KISS. Keep it simple stoopid!

Kids and parents all together - What an ORGY!!! Can here be a sequel?

We enjoyed the story... just long enough to not be boring... hot enough to get us excited and keep the interests...

Keep up the good work...

This story has been one hell of a ride. I was entranced with the first sibsest fuck. Good Job, well written and I didn't stumble over any typical writing or serious grammatical errors. It appears that it has been some time since you have written. Have you traveled on or lost interest?