All Comments on 'Brian's Choice Ch. 00-01'

This was a very good first chapter keep it going I rated it 5 star's

Good start. Waiting for more

What a great story well done

Maybe I’m on my own here, but I prefer to keep politics out of my porn. All the talk about forced business lockdowns (not a thing), schools tricking kids into getting vaccinated (also not a thing), and no one in California caring about freedom (lol), really threw off any enjoyment I might have gotten from this one.

loved the store look forward to the next chapter. I can see what I hope looks like a few twists and something out of the blue.

I think you should stay away from politics, especially the controversial topics which also have little to do with the plot and character development.

Decent start. The political stuff just made me chuckle out loud. Curious to see where it goes from here. 4 stars for a good first chapter.

Brilliantstart to what seems to be a great story. Waiting for the next chapter and all that follow. 5 Stars

Looking forward to the next chapter. Great start.

Thank you

Bad

More please. Was disapointed when I realised there was but one chapter. :)

Its amazing how the 18 yo california kid talks like a 50 year old midwesterner. Can't wait for his hot takes on Critical Race Theory