All Comments on 'Bruises Ch. 12-13'

The story is good but why did her name change from Peggy to Karen in Chapter 13?

It' a good story, but the chapters are too short. I think I would have enjoyed it more if I would waited until the whole story was posted.......Rich

Thanks for catching that. Walt's mother's name is Peggy, not Karen. You'll see Karen in another upcoming story. FYI-The entire story was submitted to Literotica before the first chapter appeared. Literotica makes the decision as to when they are published.

Kathi

It's ok, your story is great. Making me hard as hell. You tease as good as I do do, maybe more!

Great work!

L.A.Wicker

13 felt like jump back 5 or 6 ch. it broke the flow of a good story

You need to stick with one name for the mother,Keran or Peggy.

Please make up your mind. You've also messed up the son's name

a couple of times in previous chapters.