All Comments on 'California Ch. 01'

Man I hope part 2 is better than part 1

Other than the fact that this was terrible.

Maserati, settee

Incest? A mom watching her daughter give head? Are you serious? Gonna be hard pressed to get me to read part two as boring as that was...

I enjoyed it and rated it 5.

I don't understand the bad comments on here. The story had good build-up and character development. It should be continued.

I like it, I love it . . . I want more of it ! ! !