All Comments on 'Candy's Punishment'

Come on. You have to finish this story. Let her Daddy Cherry her. Then, maybe add one of her girlfriends.

Rjay

daddy really outsmarted her with his brand of punishment... that was a pretty neat twist at the end, well done.

Regardless of his excuse he is still a NGPoS--Which stands for a No Good Piece of Shit

Sounds sexy

You need to have someone edit this.

Thank God it's not finished cause the writer probably have the dad return with his buddies and a few neighborhood boys and let them all have a turn or some stupid shit like that

Not that my opinion matters but I personally enjoyed this story. Usually, I don't prefer the girls to have such a willingness to please their daddy. As this, typically, doesn't seem like the natural reaction to such a scenario. At least, not to me. However, the writer of this common, taboo-themed story, managed to create more of a fairy-tale, fantastic fantasy with a bit of a daydreaming appeal to it. Suprizingly the way you wrote this piece gave me the permission that I needed, to thoroughly enjoy, even the , otherwise, usual and regularly unattractive and unrealistic aspects throughout the storyline. It was fairly short though. I believe if you.had stretched it out a bit longer. (Perhaps build upon daddys anger a bit more, and maybe, as well as, the forced play) then more of an edging effect could take place for the readers. Otherwise, Well done. 3.5 stars/5 stars