by nikki_2021
Really liked this story. Hope there is a ch2 to come but if there isn't, this was short, sweet, and fun. Great job!
I like the idea and you've provided a good opening, I just hope there's more of it to come. I look forward to seeing where you take it.
Also, it's good to read some new stuff written by you, it's been too long.
Hi babe, love the story very hot idea and a game that would be lots of fun to play :-)
Great start to the story but it feels only 1/3 done. You whet our appetite and then end it way too soon. All the girls should play or at least the first two.
short but sweet and so so hot! If only ... I go camping several times a year.. Never been lucky... Maybe next time! Great story yet again x
Very naughty ladies - please tell me there is more to come in this tale. I need to know what Mandy gets up to in the shower block!
Liked it as an opening chapter
Now write the book there is so many places you could take this
I liked it. Please do continue - I can imagine all sorts of potential happenings.