All Comments on 'Carry On Cruising - Pt. 01'

very...group sexy.

Nice!

Excellent start; I'm eager to see how the rest of this cruise works out!

Swingers cruise! Where do we book?

Tremendously excited about this new effort, Emily! Great fan of your creative and exciting works!!

Good start to this saga. Lots of fun description. Looking forward to sharing the next episode as the cruisers share each other 😜

Great story! Can't wait to see where it goes.

Just don't take too much inspiration from Specter Dugan. Some tension is fine, but sad endings are sad. :D

Thanks for your work.

I didn't quite catch it. Is this one of the Pineapple Line boats? With a name like Heart of the Sea I certainly hope whale watching is not part of the itinerary. Thank you for a delightful first installment! 5 stars

I just started reading it and already it's a favorite after the waking-from-a-dream scene where the wife's dream was about missing a flight. Hilarious! Well-written. Ok, on to the rest of the story ...

Fun start. My only gripe is our narrator couldn't see the action next door, yet he's describing it.