All Comments on 'Casting Call Ch. 01'

It was a slow read and took a long time to get to the "money shot" but it has promise. I only saw one spelling error. I look forward to your next installment.

The rating is salvaged by the quality of the story line. But (you knew there was one of those coming) you need to work on writing skills, and/or get a good editor. There were some word choice errors, dropped words, etc. That said, the story line is entertaining, and reasonably plausible. Work on those writing skills, but don't give up.

-- KK in Texas

Loved the story and look forward to reading part two, thank you!