by FyodorKaramazov99
Wow! That was hot! Good imagery and story line.
We're looking forward to Chapter Two!
Great combination of masterbation, oral, BDSM, femdom, lesbian, gay curious sex! Hard to do but it all comes (should that be cums) together in a tale that can take off in numerous directions. The heavy punishment was a little too much for me but the rest of the story whets my appetite for every kinkier adventures - whats next?
Love all the combinations of sexual interests. Hoping chapter two has brother and sister fucking each other.
Mike
Wish I knew where this story went to next. I am sure that it would be very different and hot.
I just wish I had some one like you but I do my lady next door she saw me in a a baby blue nightie and she made me her bitch now I have to be over her place every day one day she gave me pills she told me they will make my breasts grow and when I am done you will be mine sissy bitch for life and that what happen
Have gone over this story many times. Wish that there was a part two, but that is up to you. If you have gone into writing this as an entire book please let me know so I may buy it.
If only you could write it would have been a really good story.
Good concept but awful writing.
He was a quick study? You mean he was a quick learner.
What is muling?
You need an editor.