All Comments on 'Ch. 01: Threshold'

Just wanted to thank those that have taken the time to read the story. I've gotten a little feedback via email and your encouragement means a lot to this writer. I'm very pleased you've enjoyed it... I enjoyed writing it (and yes, I'll definitely write some more).

Thanks again,

Wilson Spalding

You did a marvelous job with this one. You took your time in bringing it along, your talent more than adequate to hold my attention. Then you paid my patience off with a fabulous action sequence. Great all the way along. This is one of the best---and more realistically imagined---stories I've ever read on this or any site. Kudo's!

Great dialogue. Very natural and believable conversations in that situation. Then, turning on Janie's inner slut was a joy to read. I like the slow start before the sex. It makes the story believable and builds the anticipation, which is the great thing about a good story ... or good sex!

Believable setting and storyline. White-Hot topic. Very hot sex. This angle isn't for everyone, but if you enjoy wife/girlfriend sharing (or just fantasizing about it) then this is just what the doctor ordered. Slut-wives are so much fun to read about.

fantastic story.great build up,not too long,superb ending.

so much more entertaining than the "true" stories.

and for all the negative critics:"get a life"

...there has to be a chapter two, sonner or later.

Hot, hot hot! I didn't think I was gonna like it- enormous jocks at a super bowl party. But I loved it!