All Comments on 'Chance Encounter Ch. 07'

Still a great story but it seems to be bogging down. I suspect the next chapter will pick it back up. I think the FBI would really have gotten involved much sooner. Keep em coming.

Has been mentioned in the New Story Review thread on the Lit forum (Author's Hangout).

What an arrogant arsehole! Paul is thinking only of himself and not the good of the company when he says "I won't do business like that. You are not going to, either. Most importantly, Dunn Chemicals will not. At least it won't happen as long as I'm sitting in this chair and it's my call." He is basically cheating on his company by denying them the chance to use the information and certainly deserves the loss of his stock options if not more. AutumnWriter, you are going to have to pull something out of the bag if you hope to save this tale which is, quite frankly, becoming less believable each chapter. Sorry AutumnWriter, you are losing me!

Just catching up so I'm late finding this great story.

Thanks for the entertainment

PT

EutumnWriter:

You are a very devious woman if your writing is any indication. I love it! Thank You. Ronnie W.

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