All Comments on 'Chatting with Daddy Ch. 01'

by NotDoctorPhil

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
WOW

some of my own dark fantasies can't wait for the next chapter

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
my fantasy too

i;ve often thought of my sexy dad masturbating...me. your story could have been written by me gf. i'm stacy18_bi@hotmail.com

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Very hot

Thx. I hope you continue the story, sat here reading ( yes you got me exited) when my youngest daughter walked by and saw my condition, she just winked and smiled and is now in the shower.

rafman188rafman188about 13 years ago
Next6 please!

So hot. The next episode cannot come soon eough!

NotDoctorPhilNotDoctorPhilabout 13 years agoAuthor
Apologies

My apologies for a few grammatical errors I saw. A missed period or accidently typing "he known" instead of "he'd known" can throw readers off. I'll try to do better when I continue this chapter, and the one on Katie and Randy as well as Touching His Daughter, later tonight.

In the mean time, if anyone is interested in talking/exchanging story ideas, feel free to contact me. :)

Thanks for your kind words!

imharmless69imharmless69about 13 years ago
Excellent

Well done. The tension and excitement are well worth a few typos.

_Kushiel__Kushiel_over 12 years ago
Well Done

In this age of tech, I'm surprised that more of these stories aren't around. But job well done, aside from the obvious typos and few grammatical errors, I enjoyed the concept and the build-up towards their mutual goal.

I'm really looking forward to the next installment!

NymphoVirginNymphoVirginover 12 years ago
Very hot

Loved the build-up. Really great. Keep up the good work. ;P

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
fucking A

that was hawt

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

Where's chapter 2?????

This was sooooo hot but i was a little disappointed when i didn't see a continuation of the story...

I really hope you'll post it soon. I'm dying to see how this story plays out.

sexydad50sexydad50about 12 years ago
Hot

This could definitely be continued....

Really liked it

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
loved it

love the build up in the story.. would love to see dad and daughter together in some future story!

bbanks69bbanks69over 11 years ago
keep going please

u cant stop here love this story

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Still waiting

You have a way with dialogue and drawn out tension that is irresistible! Sequel please.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
please, please, more!!!

your writing is white hot!!!

please give us more!!

xxeloxxeloalmost 9 years ago
Hot !

This is so hot! Needs to be continued !

I love the slow build up, and the break up too…

cause now they have to start and build up again !!

Love it, looking forward to chapter 2

xxelo

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Sequel

It's been a good while since you submitted this very hot story. SO I take it there's not going to be a sequel? Such a shame!! This was absolutely one of the hottest and a very creative story line. Please reconsider.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Next part needed badly

Please write the next part

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

When I first started talking to my daughter about her hottie friends it was exciting

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

I enjoyed reading the story. Please write the next part. 5 stars

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

CH01 . . . to be cont'd . . . you should have! Now Alexa is 30 . . . how did she turn out?

AceofSpades0121AceofSpades01218 months ago

Ah the pain, I need to know more

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