by JLCC
"She Tannisly sat down, ..." - what the heck is that supposed to mean??
Is this how much attention you paid to Proof Reading?
With such a glarinmg example I didn't bother reading any further!
Who knows, could have been a prizewinning story but because even you didn't pay much attention to it why should anyone else??
Personally I was generous - 2*
The "k" scenes are so much fun. Written perfectly. So nice having her use the slut too. ;) I've cum to this a lot
Some of it may even be true
Thanks mr author man! ;)
"Cheryl"
Thanks
Can't even remember what's true and not anymore. ;-)