All Comments on 'Chiaroscuro'

Wow. Just WOW. I've NEVER read a story on Literotica that I loved so much. It was sexy and beautiful and so lovely. I was left wanting more, but at the same time, another chapter would ruin the simple beauty of this story. I am shocked at this gem.. not exaggerating. :)

Tears still in my eyes from the sorrowful part about her sister. Your writing is so powerful. I'm in awe. I think this might be the best story I've read on this site. Beautiful, sensuous, passionate, emotional, and 100% satisfying to this reader.

definitely a 100. WOW! you are an amazing writer. thank you.

I have read the best. No comment is adequate, no adjective descriptive of this wonder. How perfect and loving. How sensual and quietly violent. Thank you for this jewel.

You have captured so much in this story. I can't even begin to express how much I loved it! Another glorious addition to your already astounding stories. You've given Literotica a taste of what a true author is about...perhaps that taste will be contagious.

I have never read a story like this on the web and I have read thousands. In mere moments I have gone from a raging erection to tears welling in my eyes.....wow...what a ride! Even you may have a hard time topping this one........thanks sooooo much.

there were more men like you!

This is a truly beautiful story! Before this Sweet Submission was my favorite... now I'm not so sure. You have a true gift. I'm glad you're still writing & I hope to read a new one soon. -wonderspring

Wow! This was amazingly erotic as well as intamate, that is something hard to find these days. I can only describe this as... beautiful.

OMG! What a wonderfully lusty and sad tale. I am impressed. I will be looking at all of your work.

Excellent story. Wow.

As always, its very sexy and wonderfully written story

Thank you for such a well written, erudite, interesting, and touching story. Finally, Literotica has given me a piece of literature to read and enjoy. You are a marvel. Thank you.