All Comments on 'Christmas Cookies'

It makes a change to read something a bit of thought has gone into. Good writing.

The story was good about the stepfather and the stepdaughter. I wonder if you would be able to explain in the next chapter about the mother's past and the the dark side she talked about.

a very good, well written story. i assume there is a second chapter in the works to tie in the mothers actions in the end.

I would like to know what the wife is going to do.

Ok here I was thinking that this was going to be just another story about a step-father lusting after and finally getting into his step-daughters panties, when low and behold you flipped the script and wrote a very very good story. I hope that you add more chapters tot his as I would love toread about what mom was doing when she left to go caroling and what her derk sordid past!

Thanks again for a great story.

While I'm not so sure about the theme, I think this is the best story I've ever read in Literotica in terms of style, editing, vocabulary, grammar -- all the technical points of writing. Keep up the good work, please.

Excellent ending. Here I was thinking everything was about to turn to more of the usual boring shit as mom would inevitably catch them and blow a gasket and then she'd instantly change her mind and they'd all end up in a sweaty pile on the bedroom floor. Gah. Instead you had her pull her pants off to reveal a semen soaked red thong. The "Forgive me lord!" line was a nice touch as she made her decision, thus saving the story.<p>

I also enjoyed the scene where the hot step daughter tried on each new thong for her step dad, including his narrative of how her pussy looked with each new thong. Letting her have a little pubic hair show above the top of some of the thongs...excellent. That bit where the one labial lip peeked out from behind...pefect. It's little things like that where most writers here miss the boat. The attraction of these stories is the awesome beauty of the woman and the power her beauty has over her fortunate victims. The tease leading up to that first glimpse of the Promised Land, that's the hook. Good job with that.<p>

Way too many people focus on comically huge cocks and a subsequent generic pounding of the woman's anonymous body and most of the time I doubt the majority of us even finish reading those stories. Once it gets to that point in the story I know I usually just click on to the next one. "Been there, done that-itis."<p>

Much better to focus on the all important touch-taste-feel-scent-sight of the woman and the thoughts the characters are having as they get their first taste of the long sought treasure. You gave us some of that, so thanks! I hate when these stories needlessly turn to shit and yours didn't. You let your story stay alive and flourish.<p>

I gotta say though, it's gonna get really hokey really quickly if you immediately turn this thing into an out of control incestuous three way. Don't do it. We've got a million of those stories and they're nearly all stupid and forgettable. No way this mom and daughter go from zero to a hundred miles an hour in the blink of an eye. For this story to be believeable they'd have to build up to it since they've had absolutely no sexual inclinations towards each other up to now. Quite the opposite, in fact, with the daughter only knowing mom as the ultimate pent up prude.<p>

Just let mom watch them, and understand. Let us understand what brought mom to this point. Let mom indulge her re-born ("born again"?) lust slowly at first, through subtle but increasing encouragement of exhibitionism around the house. Don't let hubby and daughter know mom knows about them, not right away. Let them think they're getting away with something. Let them be pleasantly surprised as mom relaxes her dress code for the daughter, and for herself too. Let them wonder what's gotten into mom lately? Mom will slowly stoke the fire, with the daughter seizing on opportunites to add her own coals.<p>

Bottom line, let this thing grow naturally. Keep it sexy by holding back on mom's active participation. There's so much potential with this story that I hope you do it justice. If mom works this thing correctly you have the opportunity here to create an off the charts titillation factor for the dopey dad. Hell, there's so much potential with this story that I wish I was writing the next couple chapters! LOL!!<p>

Good job so far. Thanks for the interesting read. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Scores a perfect 10...

cant wait for the next installment...

The stepfather is a sick pervert. The girl is completely unrealistic and apparently believes any man with an erection is a sign from God that she should let them have sex with her. Also, the ending made no sense at all. This story is stupid and poorly written.

Yeah, no pun intended with the title of this post! A human touch to it, well written, got the essence of Pop's emotions and I can fully relate to the pious, self-righteous wife and her mind games. Lovely twist at the end. he he!

Haven't been around such a confident teen so parts of that were out of character for me - but it's a story so it's all allowed.

Most enjoyable. Well done!

Great ending. Would she have catted around if the hubby had gone out with her? Did the daughter conspire with mom to nail the step-dad?

Every one of your works I have read to date has rocked me with it's finale.

A great pity I can only go 5*

That sneaky Margaret! LOL. Mayhap Chester is gonna be VERY Happy. Good tale.

Great story. Felt real and loved the ending!