by paralleltasking
Fucking little punk ass rapists!! Prosecute them as adulyys and her piece of shit brother as well. They just love rapists in prison. If I could give this a negatyive score I would. What a sick fuck you are to write trash like this!
That's life--a series of unfortunate decisions, starting with the purple bikini. Could she untie her own top while lying down sunbathing, as girls so often do? Or is it better she is dominated by them untying it? Wolf whistles/catcalls from the boys when she comes outside?
The story is driven by her fear of the creepy neighbor, her fear of the pics getting out, and her secret hot desires. Amplify these? Did the neighbor once do something more than looking, to her or to someone else? Did she know someone whose reputation was ruined by pics getting out, or does she have an upcoming wedding which will be lost? Does her body (and feelings) betray her--yes--can she have more inner conflict between her disgust for these boys and her desires? Sometimes her hands start moving in compliance with their requests before her inner speech has made up its mind, showing her unconscious agreement while her consciousness is still dithering !!!
A tuny bit more background on her relationship with her brother, so his coldness is either surprising or expected? It's surprising to us but im not sure if it's surprising to her. Did she offend him somehow, so the events of the story are ultinately her own doing? Or is that just the way he is?