All Comments on 'City Heat'

I could feel the intensity with every word I read. Beautiful stuff...

You write so well. And your passion comes through.

I really enjoyed this....I agree your wild passion comes through in your writings :)

Thank you! I need a cup of coffee now ;)

Not a wasted word, and it reads like poetry. I felt as if I was in the room sweltering right along with them. It is nice, an erotic tempo that is not overdone. Subtlety sweet.

I enjoyed this very much, FB. I've always admired poets because they say so much in so few words. You did that very well with City Heat.

You almost made want a hot and humid summer day...almost! ;)

I'm off to read your other stories.

I loved this story. It was well written, full of detail, and the sex was hot and intense. I liked the way you described this little tryst in a very sexual way, but without being vulgar at all. It's affect on me was quite apparent...if you'd have been here to see. :)

Well done..

Excellent little (I like that its short) story. And, right to the point. ;)

"Please... " I know that feeling. Good job, FB!

Another excellent example of passion, sensuality, lust and more in wonderfully written example of erotic prose.