All Comments on 'Cliff and Sue'

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LordSlamdawggLordSlamdawggabout 11 years ago
Kind of sexy & sweet

I appreciated the restraint showed even in the middle of some very heated carnal exchanges. The author glossed over the relationship with the daughter, evidently it didn't impact the narrator as much. Too bad because I'm always down to hear a well rounded daughter to mom switch saga.

Yet, what's here is quality. I especially appreciate the off hand expositions of late 70-early 80's England . This is a low-key but charming read that perhaps needs just a bit of drama/ conflict to set things off to best effect. I thank the author.

sailandoarsailandoarabout 11 years ago
Great ...

...Job, you balance the physical, emotional and intellectual very well. Your dialog is smoothly done.

chris73170chris73170about 11 years ago
love it

i hope they go farther and he takes her through her tights and she has problems with the pill and has to go back to the cap or the condoms and one of those fails

oldwayneoldwayneabout 11 years ago
I think it's worth continuing.

I like your stories, but your pen name makes me think of Vera Lynn, DBE. I guess I really am showing my age. Five Stars!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Looking forward to follow up.

Great story, as are all that you write. I remember the 70's & 80's well very true to life. Keep up the good work. Looking forward to Sue & Maureen meeting.

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