by CaptBionic
Great job....succinct, yet full of background details to keep it real. I just wish she were MY neighbor....sigh..... Thanks for your efforts....keep 'em coming, so to speak.
But it's harder than hell to read an author's mind. I'm ready to flip a coin.
Her shooting him down was a bit of a downer, hopefully he will wear her down over time. I like a bit of voyeurism, but only if it builds up to something more.