All Comments on 'CNG (Cute Neighbor Girl) Ch. 06'

by CaptBionic

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

I missed this story. Please continue in less time than before. This is one of my favourite series ever.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
a superb series so far

excellent writing and plot development

RadientRadientover 13 years ago

I have to say I've been a bit peeved to have waited for this chapter. Liked it a lot btw.

BradehoftBradehoftover 13 years ago
Danni and Becca

He can now have his cake and eat it too. But what if he wants pie instead or both at the same time. Plan 2 get Becca and Chad together then live happily ever after with Danni if thats what he wants

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
End it here

I discovered this story for the first time today and read chapters 2 through 6 in one sitting. For me, this story took two everyday, normal people (with well-developed libidos) from chance encounter to friendship/lust simultaneously, to culminate in a healthy, adult love. Don't fuck with it. You're an excellent writer, so please begin another tale.

CaptBionicCaptBionicover 13 years agoAuthor
This is it, for this story arc

Thanks for the feedback, I am honored that all of you found the story worth the wait. I believe this is it for this story arc. When I've got a good idea I can work with, I will start with a new set of characters. Thanks for the support.

Bionic

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
fitting end

had been following the CNG tale for a while now.

really loved the fact that these were everyday plausible people. good content, delightful sarcasm at times.

and it should end this way. with a new beginning not fully fleshed out. like in real life.

great job. worth the (long) wait.

sillytheclownsillytheclownover 13 years ago

this was great, I would like to hear more about them later on. It was one of the stories i have been trying to check on.

I added you to my favorites. Can't wait for more from you.

lawrenclawrencover 13 years ago
More

Please continue the story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Great series

You are an excellent writer and this was a very good story line.

sports1sports1over 13 years ago
The END, no WAY!

Hey I enjoyed your story! You write well and are funny(in a good way), you can't just leave us hanging like that. What happens next...what about Becca? Does Chad the IT guy hook up with Becca. Will Phil and Danni go on vacation?? I'd say your not done yet... sports1

slide64slide64about 13 years ago
WONDERFUL

what a great story - you have a great writing style, and the plot was well developed and really kept me interested throughout. The sex was very hot. Keep writing - we all want more!

GirlWatchGirlWatchalmost 13 years ago
Wonderful, hope you continue

I was thrilled to check back and see you'd done #6 and hope you'll return for #7. Love this story. Thank you.

Andy1970Andy1970over 12 years ago
Thank You

Absolutely the best story I've ever read on Literotica. I fell in love with Danni while reading this story. Great job. I sure hope there's more to come.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Great story...

I actually have a cute neighbor girl of my own who calls me Babycakes.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

Any girls Becca out there in RL? That's just what I'm looking for.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
good job

Keep on writing, light hearted, sexy, well developed stories. You are one of the best here on Literotica.

I should know, I probably read them all,.... ;)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Nice!

Nicely done. Good story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
I enjoyed the story a lot, but...

the ending was so abrupt, as if you suddenly just decided you wanted to end it

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
very nice

This story really hit home as i have had that relationship but so far without your ending and their sisters...keep up the good writing

TheMadHatter52TheMadHatter52almost 11 years ago
Is this the end?

Is this the last entry in the story? There are still issues that are unresolved. Will Becca be cool with the breakup and them going behind her back? How are they going to be both co-workers and lovers?

kingleonidasskingleonidassalmost 11 years ago
A great read

I'm going to guess that was a real situation. I can certainly identify with it if it is. I've felt like Phil for a long time. Thanks for the story. My Dani is a girl named Jolene. There are several stories about her under my pen name. Hope you will read them. Good luck and keep writing.

jonyoungaujonyoungauover 9 years ago

Hope the story could of continued. Maybe a where are they now type of sequal if you ever post again on this site.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
i realy enjoyed your series

they are well written and and a similar thing happened to me. In so much as having found love lost it only to have it work out much latter.

JohnnyRebBBJohnnyRebBBalmost 2 years ago

Maybe it’s me but IF she has a rule about dating work colleagues which prevents them having an affair, how come she shags the in house IT guy? The one that sorted her spreadsheet problem and a work colleague? Shome Mishtake Shirley??

Nakedhiker76Nakedhiker76almost 2 years ago

I loved everyone of the chapters. I hope you write more! Well written, great variety of content. Enjoyed the romantic relationship evolution as much as the sex scenes. Very well done!

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