All Comments on 'Coached'

Excellent story, well written, and very believable too. A perfect 5.

So well crafted in short space — the seduction seemed so possible; felt like it could easily be a real world experience or a fantasy. The lead into the sex comfortable conversation and the response to the question: “Why did you invite me here?” so perfect. Both women believable. The sex scene felt real/easily imagined, no way gratuitous. Thought the “ersatz cock” element fit the experience perfectly, including the dialogue. Well, she made a new female friend. Love how you closed the piece: the more serious wondering what she would tell her husband and Riley’s light hearted tease “There’s soccer practice again tomorrow.” First of your pieces I’ve read; must rectify.

Lovely stiry. Horny, horny, horny. I've just ordered a 'Tantus Feeldoe Stout'! Can't wait to surprise my 'friend', Elke.

Amazing!!’

Hi. Great start is there going to be a second chapter really enjoyable thanks xx Peter

Slightly disappointing ending, one text from Mike and everything that happened is dismissed without any "we should do this again, soon" or "coach, I will need more practice time". Unless you were planning to continue this as a series.

A really nice piece -- one of my favorite kinds of story. I hope you continue it.

Nice! Open premise for another episode. This could something worth watching.

This has to be the start of a longer series. Please, please!

Hmm. Audrey Hepburn is alive and well and writing lesbian porn on literotica.com. Another fantasy fulfilled!

I want to experience this so bad

Great story. What I like most about it is the dialog. People communicating what they like, and reassuring each other. That's real sex.

Super accurate.......could have continued or the author has the beginning of a genuine story line capturing the

great relationship of two very sexual women........

As an 80 year old man who has buried two wives and is fortunate to enjoy a long-term partnership with a woman 30 years younger..........the story was delightful.......

Credible. Passionate. Sexy. I think it would be difficult to take this forward without spoiling it. It's the unknowns which make this tale so tantalising. Taking a story beyond sexual consummation and maintaining the heat is not easy. Well done. Lance.

Not Credible. Rank is not sexy - even if you shower.

Another terrific, white-hot story. Lesbian sex has always turned me on. Extremely well-written.