All Comments on 'Cock a Doodle Doo'

Firstly, well done on a well written story. I have probably stopped reading more stories than I have completed because of the poor writing. Apart from a couple of grammatical errors, yours is terrific. I love the way you have narrated the story "in the vernacular" - you certainly achieved what you set out to do.

Nice character development - if you had wanted to you could have done more with that, but was good. And of course the sex was well handled too - nice use of all the senses.