by Flying_low
Really Great Story! I got so far into it, I forgot I was cooking!
Overall a very well-written story, with several exceptionally hot sequences.
Perfect balance and blend of romance, sex, business, fashion, and emotion. Loved the happy ending!
Keep writing!
I hope you have more in you. Sexy without being too raunchy, loving without being too maudlin, very erotic. The ending was a little too Disney for my taste, but not out of line with the rest of the story.
Keep writing and submitting!
It's almost as if somebody's fairy goddessmother was sitting on her shoulder.
Seems like the sequel should be called "Dessert for Four"
Yes, a bit contrived, a bit too much of a coincidence but the line between good fantasy and deus ex machina (or should that be dea xxx machina) varies so much...
It's just my cup of tea. ;) One of the best stories I've read here. 5 stars - only because just 5 stars are available, for me I'd give it more. I hope you write more about Cindy, Jason, Lauren and Max. Oh, Max. He's just yummy.
I don't care if the ending was a bit contrived (as someone else said), i thought this was an incredible story. Modern day Cinderlla and all that. Sexy, erotic and love all rolled into one. I would loved to have seen a follow up to this with the ongoing adventures of Cindy, Jason, Laura and Max, but after 10 years, I'm guessing that wont happen.