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All Comments on 'Teacher of the Black Cocks Ch. 01'

by amenarimix

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DickeredDickeredover 2 years ago

Not bad considering English is not your native language.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Please get an editor.

BoxerR100BoxerR100over 2 years ago

Not bad for a newbie. Keep writing, you will get better. You have the basics down..look forward to reading more of your work.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Garbage!!!

karl4sexkarl4sexabout 2 years ago

Your fantasies are super hot! Loved this story! This isn`t about writing in perfect trained english, it`s about making the reader hot and horny, you sure made a stunning success with me

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

good stuff

CuckRick1952CuckRick19529 months ago

Great story and very wel written! Looking forward to more.

FarmerRon1955FarmerRon1955about 2 months ago

Honey, in my opinion there is nothing to criticize. This was a very hot story. I enjoyed it enough to give it 5 stars! I look forward to reading chapter 2!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

Please get an editor. The Grammar was bad

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

Part 2 was too much Abuse to the woman.

literoticmanliteroticman28 days ago

You did a fabulous job. Very good story so far.

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