All Comments on 'College Trio'

Nice one dude

wow. very intense.

Lovely story. Well developed and well thought out.

BRAVO!!!!

4.5 thumbs up!

Its good to see you back and writing again. Your stories are always so well developed and charecter driven. Please do not take so long between submissions.

Its good to see you back and writing again. Your stories are always so well developed and charecter driven. Please do not take so long between submissions.

How can I NOT think about this story for the next few years? Hot as hell, plausible and yet unrealistic: This it how it really happened - in my dreams...

The story developed at the right pace, introducing the characters and building the story to its fabulous climax.

If you take time between submissions, I'm sure its because you are conscious of the need to maintain the high quality of writing. My only suggestion would be to proof read a little more carefully. That said the errors didn't stop me from reading on (as have some people's), nor did they prevent me from enjoying your work.

Well done and thanks for submitting it.

What a great story! Looking for another guy to even out the ratio? I'd be ready to join! What a wonderful learning experience! Both girls should have come out with "MA"s to expand the trio to a quintet.

This story is hot on a number of levels, im hoping that you do a follow up story for when they get back to college. Im looking forward to it, yes to another partner but maybe someone casual, im thinking a girl over a guy for now anyway.This story is ripe for a number of chapters of various sexual adventures that you would be able to create so well with your mind. Looking forward to it!

Between the wonderful build up of friendship and care all the way to the steamy climaxes, it was a great read.

I hope you make many more, for with this style and prose you have talent to make many people happy.

I loved this one. I would like to see a second or third chapter. I like how their relationship came first and the sex was based on a closeness only time can give.

Thank you so much for this story. I really enjoyed it but is probably because I identify too much with it. But it was really well written and was a joy to read. Keep up the good work

It was a great read. Loved the way the characters & their relationships were portrayed. All in all, a very sweet (beginning) & hot (end) story.

Tc,

Div

Particularly appreciated that you took the time to introduce and develop the characters before the eventual threeway. I do hope you follow this up.

Loved it all.

I know how it is being a nice guy. I'm glad there are still rewards.

Good story, nice pacing and revarding ending .

Slow to start but so worth it!! Hot read

loved the way it built up until the final threesome and that was so erotic....just one thing - it is physically impossible for a mans cock to enter a cervix or for the cervix to allow entry of a penis.....that only ever opens during child birth.....other than that the sex between them was amazing...they are in for one hell of a fun time next season....just hope they don't introduce another man in to their set up....that would ruin it.....loved it

Since I got married at 17 I have learned quite a bit since that time (it was a long time ago). Learned about G-spots, 69, other fun things. Those were the days. I also learned that you don't need to have a big dick to receive and provide a lot of fun.

I loved the slow build up. Great story and character building!

Man I Miss College! This is one of my all time favorite stories. Great job!

We need a sequel! I love this story!!! Great Job! :)

Why couldn't I have gone to school with Dot and Mo???

You've written some great stories, and this is one of them, but none of them is more deserving than this one of a sequel(s)!

What a refreshing read. Enjoyed all of it and agree for the continuation of the "nice ones".

Loved this story, so over the top but so well written, paced , characters and sex descriptions. Every schoolboys dream cum true.

If these are your dreams JoeDreamer, dream on !

Great story would love to see more chapters

4 Stars just because there’s no part 2.

Well done with a few typos or mistakes. A few homophones.

Liked it & willmark for future readings.

Bill S.

Outstanding, and so hot...!

LOVE the characters, and the time you took to develop them, and the dialogue-wonderful contrast between their hot bodies...while I love all boobs have esp fondness for smaller, and didn't think there was going to be any mention of their muffins-Mark and Mo need to convince Dot she HAS to stop shaving...presume they borrow big fan to help air that room out, tho dad's aren't stupid-they'll all have BIG grins.

Going into ALL-TIME FAVES folder-somewhat surprised score wasn't higher-author consistently puts out winners

That’s three to draw to.