All Comments on 'Coma'

I hope you write a second chapter where he fucks the living shit out of her!

One of the best ive read. more please

If you write a follow-up to this stupidity, I hope you have him file a lawsuit against her and the hospital. Send her to jail and get a big settlement from the hospital. Even that wouldn't save this implausible mess. No stars.

May they both live happily ever after.

I enjoyed every word.

Good story; well told.

ram

I don't think I've ever read one like this before, but I loved it. Great characters, too. Now I'm going to have to check out the rest of your submissions.

I want to read a second part. Two great people, that now belong together. Avery interesting way to bring someone out of a coma. Please write more to this fantastically hot story, wish I could give you more stars

Good grief, I am sure a lot of guys are going to be suing after being fucked by a beautiful woman, even if they did not say "yes" at first. Especially when unmarried and unattached. What got you so riled up? The story was good, and even heartwarming at the end; which was not so terrible. Perhaps not the general run of the mill in the non consent category, but Bah Humbug to you too. :P

I once had a nurse pick up my cock and hold it and that was so sensual. Many might say she was plain Jane but I saw her for her true self, a beautiful young lady. I still see her that way

no one is going to be in a coma for a month and not have a catheter, and you can't "get under" a modern hospital bed either

Enjoy it for what it is. Does nit picking it make it better or worse?

And a young nurse asked if I wanted a bed bath.

I told him no thank you !

True story.

Interesting and erotic fantasy. Hope this couple can get together and push out a half dozen rug rats.

Very HOT!! very entertaining. Thanks for sharing.

...a singular woman. Long on characters and story, short on technical accuracy, but it was a very enjoyable fantasy.

sure beats the Old Catheter. TK U MLJ LV NV

Maybe it's because I kept picturing Kathy Bates as the nurse :D

I love the unique perspective of this piece! This is the kind of victim I'd love to be! I want more! The only criticism I have is proofread carefully; I noticed a few minor glitches.

Loved every word! So incredibly hot and very well written.

asianToy

So erotic when a man is helpless with a good-intentioned woman. Emotionally fulfilling story. Warmed my heart AND my pussy.

Lovely concept. It's always the other way around these days. I particularly loved the way the characters feel human and not oversexed bunnies like in the other stories. If there were to be a sequel, I'd definitely read it. Doesn't even have to be about comas and such. Just about Gerry and his enormous member and how he and Amy turn out as first lovers and then hopefully partners.

Amazing. Well written. Sensual and sexual. I haven't found many stories like these. Big dicks aren't even a fantasy of mine but this was exactly what I was trying to find on this website. Thank you.

I liked it, very much. What an erotic and happy story. Well done. Thanks for a good happy ending!

Such a pleasant story. 5*****

I've read this one several times before, but it always gets to me. Thanks for sharing this with us!

May I offer 10 stars for this heart warming tale ?

Lovely. I loved the care she showed to him. I thought the story was beautiful and loving. X

Decent story but would have been a lot better if we knew what happened to put him in hospital,and what happened when he recovered.

Good story. Would have liked to have had one more chapter to see wheere this went further.

I really liked the story but I needed a little more to it. Like taking him home and building on a love between them..

Good story although the ending was too short.

If only all others could connect to their rapist. Especially when the rapist is a health professional.

That would be wrong and sick won’t it?