All Comments on 'Coming Home'

Excellent build up. Great contextual detail. The final act could have been prolonged.

Best narration. Exellent build-up. But could be more descriptive at end part. Also shanthi should have fucked

in front of her husband. Pl. expand more.

Nice progress. Please bring out the next episodes.

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Good Work. Expand the end part involving shanthi having sex with her master openly in front of her husband.

Also involves other ladies to have orgy

This is one of the best erotika story. But, you have left it in the midway. Better finish it by expanding. Also involves shanthi, the maid in the sex action with her Master.

It was an excellent story but feel that it needs a second round....when can we expect it.

Bahut Khoob Siraj Ahmed saab! The luscious details were great.. Can we look forward to some Dom scenes from Sujatha later on...?

very well written, one of the best i have ever read, not cheap or vulgar, pure lust and love and erotic to the core. it forced me to comment...

Outstanding build up and descriptions. Continue with Rohini and Sujatha with Rai Bahadur and Shanti joining for 4some

Nice one. Would have been better if Bahadur would have Sujatha taken by the male servant Ram first.

what about mother and son???

you need to finish this

great story but an unsatisfying ending

It is so homely when sexy bahu submits to her in-laws. It widens the relations and legs.

My cousin sister Manda became submissive to her mother and father in law and both took her in their bed. Once I visited and found they love her more than expected. And upon her signal her sasu took me when Manda was in pleasure bed with her Sasara.

Next day turned as orgy with me getting pleasure of her all holes.

Rai Bahadur wooing Shanthi to be extended further and she getting fucked in presence of Ram with his cooperation ! And to continue with Sujatha gradually for ultimately fucking her with her consent. Love to read further....

Does it have more parts

Great, slow build up. very erotic and creative. i wanted more action with shanti while ram helped and sujata watched. great story

What a story I have read for about 10 times in 5 years never ever bored even for a line

By the way this is my favorite ❤️

Can continue with all 6