All Comments on 'Compulsion'

OMG! I loved it.

Interesting situation in which you have placed your main character. I love the ending or is it the beginning. I thank you for using a petite but sensual woman in this piece, I thought it gave her more intensity and more uniqueness, compared with the more physical men. I have to admit I am a little tired of EE cupped women. Thanks for this mind challenging story, certainly one that will continue to feed the dream machine. Needless to say it was impeccably written, flawless and well developed. The main character was convincing and believable, the sex easily pictured. Thank you for something both erotic and stimulating for mind and body. - Kevin

It is like a Mind Control story, but not...loved it. Great twist, and compelling enough story to read through the few grammatical mistakes and such.

Good job!

Aside from the anon below me with a qoute and comment of "da fuqery squared"

Great story and the ending i saw coming by about page 4 but only cause in my head i jokingly thought "watch shes still in the coma"....and what do you know. Still though very well writtin, flow is great, and man was i hard for the whole thing. Practically holding my breath and itching for the next words!

I hope there is more to read of Megan now that she's awake

Woah! Amazing story! Thank you so much for writing it!

I agree with Splendid above: your use of a petite woman who's self-conscious about her figure made it much more interesting as her desire overwhelmed this reticence. Also, kinda odd, but I enjoyed how you described her outfits.

5/5, would love to see what else Megan gets into! (or gets into her, *ahem*) In the mean time, definitely checking out your other works~

When i discover talented authors, such as yourself it makes my exploration of Literotica gratifyingly worthwhile. I hope that you are still writing and will continue to do so.

I am not sure I liked the ending. A dream that becomes real or is it just another dream. Until the ending I was giving it a 5+ but now I don't know what to score it.