by yakboy69
It`s a good story that some people can relate to. Hopefully, there will be new chapters soon.
Hopefully we will not have to wait too long for the next chapter. Swirling in my mind...son becomes model or maybe daughter or both. 5 Stars for this chapter.
This wasn't jump in at the deep end but the build up, suggestive possibilities and cliff hanger was such a turn on. Looking forward to reading more. Great start, very enticing!
Yes, a very well written story and certainly arousing ...... his sister having a soaked pussy with her juices running and then focusing on her brothers hard cock with the cum drops, is so hot ! To top it off she then has one of the biggest orgasms in her life, a cum flood is great. Now she has just got to have her brother " teach her how to take these photos " and of course they need to play together so she can experience his big hard cock pulsing a big load of cum for his horny sister ! Cannot wait to read more, well done and thank you.
I AM HARD.
CAN'T WAIT UNTIL THE NEXT EPISODE
What a great story and unique plot line. I absolutely loved it. Please write chapters 4, 5 and 6!
from my point of view this is one of the best stories I have ever read, loving the content and can feel the rush the brother & sister would be feeling, keep it up (so to speak)
When you get to the end of Part 14/Ch 18, you have a cliffhanger that sets you up for the next part, which does not come. It has been nearly 2 months (58 days) since that cliffhanger. Previously, the longest between submissions was 8 days.
It's an interesting story -- though not top shelf. But if you hate stories with no resolution like I do, you will be frustrated/disappointed at the end.
Paul in Oklahoma
Who knew that the desire for incest lingers for years before presenting itself. I suspect that this potential relationship will mature even though the distance is difficult to overcome. A good start to a series.