by tulsaliza
Not a bad short but you need to proof read more.
Father Richard becomes Tom and then Richard again.
Father Chris is 8 inches long but smaller than Richard. I would prefer some realism.
Because all of them were very into it and no one showed any doupt or shame it gives the story less strength.
Finally a heads up for the male bisexuality maybe necessary for the male straight reader.
The story did make my afternoon more enjoyable, does bring out what happens behind some closed doors.. Hope you continue writing, I would be very happy to help you.
All women need to learn the benefits of cock worship. Feeling a throbbing cock in your throat makes your cunt wet and ready for a deep fuck. As a young woman I became involved with my sixty y o pastor who first instructed me in cock worship. Then he gave my cunt a deep fuck with his nine inches while mauling my big tits. When he deemed me ready, he introduced me to the church's inner circle, a group of men and women dedicated to sexual pleasure. I learned that this orgiastic behavior goes on in many churches.