All Comments on 'Controlling Bobbi Ch. 06'

Another great chapter, albeit a little short. Will there be any ore chapters to come as I have loved reading all your stuff.

Why should he share her? If anything he should be fufilling his fantasies, not those of his friends....you ruined it.

No geek in the world would take a chance something could go wrong and lose control. You must be a cuck kind of guy.

This chapter was off from the others, it was still a good read. I think most of us were looking for him to dominate her or at least get into a deeper relationship. If she is going to be screwing his friends, he has to be involved, 3 way or gang bang. I hope you keep going.

I don't think you ruined this by having him share Bobbi,, but maybe make him shy away from sharing with any of his other friends. Personally, what gets me wet is thinking of her being hypnotized into more adventures at the sex shop in her lunch breaks. Keep writing please. Alison xxxx

FAR from my all time favorite, but very good just the same.. entertaining, but nowhere close to true life... and yes I would read more.

nice work

So far a very good story with a unique approach, I now fear it might go down the hill. Sharing in most stories means: more of the same, again and again. That I don't understand why someone would share the girl he controls at all might be a personal thing, I admit. Please handle this topic wisely, like spice: just a little with caution, or it will ruin the whole meal.

Great story - love her fall into slutdom - and it would be great if Ryan had her seduce one of his female classmate, or maybe even one of her female coworkers.

I have to marvel and the imaginative details of this saga. Inviting the best buddy, Gary, to the festivities was a nice touch. It makes me wish I were proficient at hypnosis! LOL

I loved the series, until chapter 6. He had a plan and he worked it to both of their benefits. He met the woman of his dreams and she met the man who she could grow to love and enjoy. If he was into her so much, why would he share her? I realize he is young and dumb, but even he should recognize a sure thing. I was disappointed with the ending (that's just my opinion, my 2 cents). Thanks for your time and imagination.

Please continue to write:) these are good, well written and the storyline is great!

To the commenter who said stories get repetitive once they share clearly hasn't read any where they selfishly kept their prizes for them self.

Enjoy the chapter but the Joe resolution seem contrived, or at least far too easy. Especially trying to ration why Joe would give Bobbi up, instead of keeping her as his readily programmable side dish.

Would read more if they come out.

love the story from the beginning. wish there was more chapters

I love the story I hope to read moor soon

I have really enjoyed the series. As to those who are negative, you didn' t ask them to read the stories. There will always be those who can't write so they try to tear down those who do. Ignore them. Keep it going.