All Comments on 'Crossing Boundaries'

That was great submission for the IR cat. You research was on point and the story well read. I had to deduct for a few typos and at one time you changed P.O.V from second to first. Honestly, I'm going to check out your other submissions and keep an eye out for future ones as well.

Kromen

How is this Interracial, when both are indians although different religions. Hindus and Muslims in India dont make different races

Not only interacial and also arch rivals in religon, they loved and hugged and finally fucked in bliss!!

He was lucky got a fresh virgin pussy to fuck

It was a great story

in this story u discribed the hottest romance session...... and..

THE SENSUALİTY OF A WOMANS HEART..

Saying that a woman must be conservative., and at same time expressing the conservative woman's opinion to be at CHOİCE... finally saying woman gives

herself to loved ones with 100% soul...

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though it looks like Hot Sex Story.. İt is a HOT ROMANTİC MİND GAME SEX STORY....

THANK YOU

Good. Keep it up.

good story and concept.....I quite liked that..but be careful with your narration. You keep switching from first person to third person.....and that too with no transition.

But still, good story:)

Another winning story. Pls keep writing.