All Comments on 'Cruising with Stepmom'

Sweet baby Jesus. Hope there is more to come for this story

Cute story. There were some tense shifts which were a bit distracting but I liked how simple and real the story was.

Great start. Please continue.

do these kid continue to ignore the FACT that sex SMELLS? There is no way that at a minimum, the stepmother, the girl and if anyone is on the other side, ALL will smell his ejaculation results.

Great start!

hope you write more to this, loved the thought of being the mom and doing the same.... even being the guy too. the scenario was nicely played out. however, i like to read the conflict of emotions and the depth of characters is important to me as well.

aside from that, i really enjoyed this little read! don't rush it :)

Develope your story more. For example, it was a a number of paragraphs in before I was sure if you were a guy or a girl. Keep going. You will perfect your craft!

Nice start... little short, but, good start.