by kariakin22
You fucking troll, looking for slimeballs to encourage you to put ir stories on LW.
First, buy a cock cage. Then set it up with your wife. Get a black guy with at least 9 inches, so you'll really feel inadequate. You get naked and put on you cage. Watch her suck his cock while you're holding her hand. Then, hold his cock and get it lined up so he can stretch out her little white pussy. Give her plenty of encouragement like asking her to beg for his black cum. Make sure they don't use a condom and she's fertile. Make sure she takes his full load. Then, when they're done, lick their juice off his big black cock. After you get him cleaned up, lick her pussy, getting all of his cum off her. Encourage them to wait a while, then jerk him off and get him hard again. Make sure he plants another load of black cum in her fertile pussy. If possible, have them go again. When he leaves, ask if he'll come back the next night. After he's gone, fuck your wife, knowing you cant even touch the sides of her stretched out pussy. Then, have a good life.
The way you ended this story, is, the best way to get readers participation. Every one who reads it will feel obligated to cast their votes. And the winning number will be the way the story is finished. Congrats! to the author.
Let's remove all doubt.... It isn't.
just more of the same old crap with NOTHING new or exciting
Oh, just to be clear: no it was wasn't
. . . but no follow through. This makes a good opening chapter of a multi-part story, but there is no indication that this turns into a series. Keep on working at your tale, author.
Encourage your wife to find a real man, then go find a gay man for yourself. That’s obviously where you’re headed, so don’t live in denial. Good luck.
if you want your wife to fuck a black man you are just stupid and when she leaves with him you will get your just desserts
I ask because of crap like this.
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-"When I lower my panties and spread my legs in front of the Dr., I don't want him to see how hairy my cunt is."
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Do NOT start a paragraph of dialogue with a -. Just look at any book. Do you see it? No. Why? Because starting a paragraph like that is fucking stupid.
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Quotation marks exist for a reason.
Either get serious therapy and work out your demons OR
Chemically castrate yourself
A cuck is a degenerate. In every sense of the word. It's up there with pedophile. You ruin families, you encourage the WORST behavior in men(studs) and women (sluts).
They can hook up without you even existing! and a family wont be involved! that's wonderful. they will eventually grow enough self respect to grow up, or continue wallowing as hormonal children...but WITHOUT you introducing your toxic dynamic. raising another man's child is bad, or raising your own with this horrible man (you) as a role model. she'll respect you less no matter what and because of that she'll become a horrible female role model too! you see....a cuck is like a bad boil on the foot.....you can tolerate it....but life is so much better without it. so recognize your fetish is bad. killing people is a fetish too, you wanna promote it? some fetishes (this one) are bad for everyone.
26thNC comment is enough for me . But if you truly are a Troll , I'll pay the fuq'n rent on the biggest , baddest billygoat around to knock your Ass off da bridge !
You're not emotionally involved. It just two people having sex. Who cares what the circumstances are if the actions are hot? Bad assumptions - such as all black men must have big cocks and that they're great lovers. Watching his wife get fucked by a black man will end his marriage. Bad, indecisive ending. Mediocre writing. Neither sexy or entertaining.
1 star
If you’re just trolling, well done.
If this is legit, I can’t believe you need this spelled out for you.
The fantasy is one thing; the reality something else.
You can’t unring that bell.
Unless you both ARE and want to be treated as a sniveling worm of a man (and that’s what gets you off above all else) you would not want to live with the knowledge that you are inadequate in your wife’s eyes, much less let some guy demonstrate that while fucking her.
You DO need to know if your suspicions of your wife are founded. Does she want a BBC in her life? Just something different? New and exciting? Find out.
If so, can you BE that? Work out together? Reconnect?
If she wants a different man entirely and you aren’t a sniveling worm then, you two had a good run but it’s over.
But trying to live your life like a porn movie?
Shit man, I wanna be Indiana Jones or James Bond but it ain’t happening.
Some of us grew up and realized that kind of thing.
Racist. Misogynistic. Poorly written and no plot. Have you actually had sex? With a real woman? I’m only asking because this was bullshit from start to finish.
True? or False!
If this is a true account of your life, thank you for your honesty. If it is fiction, thank you for sharing your imagination. I don't know why all these others are so upset.
Just wondering how you have so much time to waste. This had to have taken several weeks, maybe months, for you to write.
Why do writers take the easy way to develop a story: use the stereotypical BBC and add the stereotypical bored MWF? Be creative instead!
if it's fiction, it's not great, short and questioning but open to too much interpretation.
If it's fact, there is a line between fantasy/porn and reality and some doors that once you have gone through them you can't go back.
1* as it's either not a great story or it's not an advice forum.
I love how our resident grouch uses his other account (mollydakat) to agree with himself! That is too damn funny. You have hit an all time low when you have to make up friends. Next we will find out that his two followers on Facebook are his own creation as well. Hahaha you kill me .
Please remember though that this site is for amateur writers who may never have written before or have limited experience..
I think that comments should only state whether it made you want to masturbate or not. For that is why we read them.
So in deference to you and the pleasure you gave me, Yes. Yes. Write more. be the cockold and enjoy. Hugs and kisses from this sissy to you
Cuck porn is porn. Most of the decent looking amateur cuck porn is good because both are attractive people and both enjoy what they are doing. The whole reason behind cucks is the wife having a good time so of course it’s good porn. It also depends on POV.
Also it’s just laziness for most cucks. Who wouldn’t love to just sit back and watch live porn knowing you only have to take care of your own pleasure.
-"This is an idiotic way to punctuate dialogue."
-"Why do so many poor "writers" just make up grammar and punctuation?"
Besides this ridiculous nouveau punctuation (Reeks of "Look at meeeeee!"), the story is... bad.
Literotica needs negative ratings in a desperate way!