by EmelieDragon
The piece wasn't wine-and-flowers romantic, but I prefer fairly brief stories that cut to the quick. Great depiction of tenderness and a balanced give and take interaction. The writing was decent and I thought the second-person narration was fun. I loved reading it and I liked that you let the man and the woman take turns controlling each other's pleasure; their differing roles developed the relationship without giving in too much to stereotyped dom/sub gender roles.