All Comments on 'Daddy I Saw You Looking'

For a first story it was VERY good!. You next story will be most welcomed!. THX.

nice start to your writting career

I bet Vicky would like a three way with mon and dad. Keep the story going.

very nice first story, hope to see more of you and your work. welcome to literotica as an author!

very nice to read

I like the story. Keep writing!!

I loved this story. Can't wait for more!!!

Came 3 times reading it!

The story...wow. Hot. Hot!

"...mixed with her anal matter..." Not so hot.

Dont bother with any more writing !

I like your writing. You have good form.

However, I believe that anal work is just plain dirty. You had the girl cleaning up Dad's penis after anal sex even to the point of having her clean up fecal matter. This is 1) not healthy, 2) not at all appetizing, and 3) just plain crappy!

Please clean up your stories and leave out the anal stuff. You will be a much better writer for these improvements.

Although I am not a fan of anal sex. I think your writing was great. Keep it up. Ps I am a trini too. Only a trini would have a name like mangochow. Lol

love the name...mangochow...trini to the bone

This is too good this got me really really crazy yesterday cause there are included all the things I actually wanna do with my daddy. Want him lick my pussy butt wanna him fuck my mouth and cum in and want him make love to both my pussy and my ass. But I gotta wait for now before he may do it to me. I hope even though it's sick to have sexual relationship with dad he will give in. Me too , I want it but in real he will have to push me cz the first time when we had first sex I resisted a lot but then he got me too aroused to stop him from sliding his previous dick in my pussy. That was hot and since that I am desperate to have more encounters with my daddy.