by nikki_2021
Another great read. Like everyone else, I can't wait for the story to continue.
Please keep writing. You're very talented.
Really sexy story my imagination was racing as i read each line with my erection as hard as it has ever been
Wowww, ohh my gosh ... you did such an incredible job to write this story ... Please go on and write some more... Mabe with a a young male ballet-dancer and his mom or older sister ...
Man, I sure hope you plan on making more chapters of this!!! One of the best I've read. Since a 10 is the highest you can score in gymnastics and 5 stars is as high as you can score here, that makes your score a 15. lol
"spinning with plans and possibilities" for future sexual adventures with her daddy and her gymnast buddies. Whether or not you choose to let us know what comes next or leave it to our imaginations, thank you Nikki_2021 for this good read.
Nikki, I hope you had a mind to go on. if not, thanks for this really cool spring time story!
Hell of a story! Had me drooling at the image and this wasn’t illustrated 🤦♂️
Great story, but it would benefit from a proof reading before being posted. There are a couple of times where you mixed up Audra and Misty's names.
Like the idea, but still feels rushed, and Doug really didn't clear any "hurdles" to taking Audra's friend, which takes away from it.
Wow what would I not give to fuck and suck these two sexy teen aged cunts, one one and two on one. Cunt crazed fucker, Lancashire, UK.
Damn that was hot stuff. Yes, it did feel a little rushed, but I think when you consider that Misty has expressed desire to fuck Audra's dad for quite some time, it was easy enough to overcome any reservations she may have had, especially when she's so damn horny (remember Audra built her up and left her kind of hanging earlier, that devious little minx). It was hot that she let him cum in her - I bet Audra was super jealous of that. Poor girl sounds like she doesn't get the pleasure she deserves, especially with that useless Gary (why girls stick with idiots that long when they clearly don't give them what they need, I'll never know). Hopefully dad and Audra will give her everything she's been after and they can enjoy a lovely threesome together, and who knows, perhaps something more.
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Hawt 'n' Spicy!
Buuut this line struck me as unintentionally funny:
-She sat back in her car seat, mind spinning with plans and possibilities.-
The image that I got in my head due to her being a gymnast, was a child in a car booster) seat.
Believable story and characters, normal people with normal desires. Much better than your brother/sister story was.