All Comments on 'Dance X Ch. 01'

The opening was intriguing and held my attention. The internal dialogue made Remi human and made me want to see her succeed. The scene where Dev sees her almost nude is well done and raises the conflict and desire for each other. The dance show scene was excellent showing Remi's physical abilities and her ability to be spontaneous. The elevator scene was in keeping with Dev's lust and her unexpected response. The ending was what was expected as Remi cleaned up and considered the possibility of pregnancy and marriage.

Thanks Mitch. Glad you enjoyed it.