Dancing Fool

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jacquioh2
jacquioh2
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He was slamming into me now, mashing me into the bed and pillow under my bottom. He paused a moment, then resumed the lunging, thrusting, pile-driving action, straining to get more of my pussy. Straining for more of this stranger's cunt. I spread my legs wider for him, letting him have his full stroke. On and on we fucked. Until finally he came and I felt the warm sperm spill inside me. I was completely filled with cock and then came this little bit more to squeeze down his shaft and seep out of my vagina.

He was spent, but thoughtful enough to continue thrusting with his vanquished penis to slide a few more times into the wet track of my cunt and give me just a little more pleasure and an orgasm. His cock even as it softened, felt deliciously filling in my pussy. Slowly, the staff that had made my pussy so happy, softened and slipped out in a stream of our juices. Now the thought came to me. "why hadn't I insisted he wear a rubber?" Only now; too late. Doing something for the first time... always... always leads to mistakes. I pressed my fingers to my forehead as if trying to change things.

I heard him snoring immediately. Quietly, I pulled back the covers and crept around the room finding my clothes. I went to the bathroom and locked the door. Surveying the smeared lipstick and rumpled hair, I shook my head in approbation at the stranger in the mirror. I hung up my dress, thankful that my pantyhose were there in a fluffy pile; at least I didn't have to go searching for them.

I sat on the toilet and felt sperm, strange sperm seeping from me. I shook my head, rather in surprise that someone had actually been inside me and left his wet evidence for me to rue quietly here in the tiled prison of a bathroom in Las Vegas.

I felt lonely. Lonely.

I cleaned myself with a warm moist washcloth, then patted myself dry. I stood staring for a long time at the naked lady in my mirror. She looked blotchy around the nipples; perhaps from a rough beard, perhaps a suckling stranger, eager for pleasure. What do you call that when a stubbly beard makes you red and blotchy? I couldn't recall. Her cheek was that way too. She lifted her chin and there were little nibble marks, not a full, old-fashioned hickey, but nibble marks. Her breasts looked alright, though, full and not too saggy, nice neat nipples in their dark areolas. She straightened her back and moved so they swayed sexily in the mirror.

"You're a mess!" The words echoed around me, and I winced. "But, you'll be Okay." I whispered, wiping off the remainder of my lipstick.

There was a magnifying mirror and strangely, I put it under my pussy with my right foot up on the vanity. What was I expecting? To see it damaged? No. A little redder than before, but none the worse for the wear he had given it.

"I could use a trim, though," I complained, wishing I had thought of that before letting a stranger see it. I touched gingerly along my swollen lips, sensing the hair, then touching.

"A little tender." I observed.

I slipped my arms into the brassiere and let my breasts snuggle into the cups as I leaned forward and snapped it in the back. My panties were ruined and I threw them in the waist basket. I bent over to pull the pantyhose up one leg, then thought better of it and sat down to do the other.

I gave myself another glance as I buttoned the dress and toed my shoes closer to slip into them. The heels clicked noisily on the tile floor and I tiptoed to keep the noise down.

I turned the light out before opening the door, and listened. I strode quietly through the snoring and let myself into the hallway overlooking the open atrium and glass elevator shafts below.

The light on my room blinked green and I quietly entered and listened. Perhaps Linda was not home either. "Oh, god," I thought, "what if SHE brought someone back to our shared room? " I peered in and let my eyes accustom to the dark, and saw that there was only one form in the second bed. There were two queen size beds, I remembered. "Two Queens." I thought quietly smiling to myself.

I slipped out of my clothes quietly as possible and searched for pajamas in my suitcase.

"Have a good time?" The voice scared me out of two years serenity.

"Oh, god!" I moaned. "Linda, would it bother you if I took a shower? Would it keep you awake?"

"Go right ahead. Go right ahead." She hadn't turned over, but lay there laughing at my discomfiture.

I showered quickly, needing a friend to tell me it was okay.

In my pajamas, I started to clear luggage and clothes off my bed.

"Just crawl in with me, hon!" she said, "I could use some company, too."

I gladly opened the cover and slid in beside my old friend and snuggled up to her.

"It's been a few years since we had a pajama party, Linda."

She laughed and wriggled against me into the spoon position. "Want to tell me about it?"

"Oh, god. If I look like doing that again tonight, just shoot me, will you? I'm dying with guilt!"

"Me too. Ain't it awful?"

I knew my secret would be safe with her.

"Fun though?" she asked.

I thought about it. "Yeah... fun...." I couldn't continue. It didn't seem necessary. After all these years it just wasn't necessary.

"It's nice, having this old friendship at a moment like this, I think." She said quietly.

"Yes. Really!" I said emphatically. I hugged her close and felt good when she grasped my arm and pulled it tighter around her, snuggling my wrist just under her breast.

"Really!" Sleep came soon.

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Great story

Except for one detail, the bastard feel asleep instantly. But even that you handled well because it gave the woman a chance to escape with her dignity. Guess I need to go to Vegas!

GloryGuy2GloryGuy2over 13 years ago
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Nice read. I enjoyed the fact that you left your "heroine" with some hair! It must be a throw back to 70's erotica. The story is believeable for a woman by herself and I enjoyed how you rolled the five women into a "What happens in Vegas stays in Vegas" scenario. Sweet! I have just started submitting to this site and appreciate well constructed pieces for insight. I intend to read some more of your work. Well done.

ClitNinjaClitNinjaover 13 years ago
Hmmm, food for thought...

I read Dancing Fool for it's erotic content and pleasure it would give me. I found it to be very real, believable, and erotic. "jacquioh2"'s use of vocabulary is wonderful and again adds to the verbal foreplay. I like her questions about doing this, the influence of alcohol on her determination that she was not here looking to hook up.

However, add a classy bar, ex-military, alcohol, a great dancer, left alone at the end of the night in the dance hall, a willing, handsome stranger - the fireworks are going to happen. The further you get into this situation, the fewer are the exit routes. In the elevator, at his door... not a chance.

Jackie's reality check about her breasts was good... even the failure to use a "trojan" - all believable. To begin with, she probably was not prepared to have dick/pussy combat - so she had no defense, although she could have perhaps gone to the 24-hour pharmacy or super market... but that is highly unlikely once she is in the room. I agree, that it was a very foolish move, especially putting her husband at risk.

I agree that if this was a male affair, the tables would be different if "jacquioh2" was writing that story. That is a given if you have read her Hot Summers Night. Perhaps there is a double standard on the author's part. However, we do not know. We only see the glimpse of one erotic night. What happens afterwards, we do not know.

Hot Summers Night is a tale of the husband cheating and the woman coping with all the implications of his adultery. That story is told from the women's point of view. This story is about the wife cheating from a woman's point of view. If we take either story and change the story line to be the male finding out about the cheating wife or the male cheating after a dance, perhaps the stories would be very similar: same emotions, same foolish decisions, same follow up behavior.

And the story was written to entertain, not pass judgement. It seems to me that a huge percentage of this website is about immorality, sex, in or out of marriage, even same sex affairs. A little common sense should tell you that this is not the place to go and read a story that is going to portray the right or wrong of a decision or action.

Not perfect, questions unanswered, in fairness, a male doing what Jackie did would be tortured and crucified... as perhaps so should Jackie... But read it for what it is - not an answer nor an explanation to a painful decision. Entertainment is the operative word here... perhaps arousal... maybe even sexual release.

If you are looking for the wrongness or rightness of what you read, you probably are on the wrong website.

She recognizes this as a mistake - but maybe it is just the condom part... We do not know what her assessment is of the "act" itself. She does say that she is dying with guilt, although, acknowledges the fun.

And it is a given: the more you do it, the easier it is... practice makes "perfect"... or easier to repeat

One final note: go back to the story title: Dancing Fool. I do not think "jacquioh2" was talking about Carl as the "Fool", especially after she describes enjoying dancing and what makes a great dancer and the potential erotic nature of a dance. No, at the outset, she calls herself a fool and indicates foolish no condom action, when she says, "Doing something for the first time... always... always leads to mistakes. I pressed my fingers to my forehead as if trying to change things."

"jacquioh2", I hope you continue writing. Not my favorite, but definitely an erotic "arouser".

Texas

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
What

If she got caught, would it be worth the pain and turmoil that would cause? It's just like driving drunk, easier to do every time you get away with it, till you don't. Then it's easy to say W.T.F. was I thinking, I'll never do that again but it's to late.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
I wish

I wish I were that tall stranger.

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