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Click hereI hope you liked this tale, and will continue to read Danica's ongoing story. Please take a moment to vote, and perhaps comment. Feel free to comment on every chapter, nobody is stopping you! *laugh* That's the only payment a free author gets, and every bit of feedback is most appreciated!
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- COMMENTS
bornwildnfreeover 7 years agoI can't wait to see this story to the end. So well written! I've fallen in love with the characters and the plot line is great!
Anonymousalmost 9 years agoReally enjoying this series. Had to have a giggle at the use of Guy Du Bastrya as a demon!
cittranabout 11 years agoThere was an accidental name change of one of the characters. It was in part 12, page 5:
"Nicholas nodded and pulled his head back inside the tent. Danica heard a soft gurgle of water and knew that Jonathon had managed to get the tub started filling."
"Danica bit her bottom lip gently, and then smiled as she turned toward the tent. She softly spoke the words of a clairvoyance spell. "Oh my," Danica gasped as she watched Jonathon bend over the tub to test the temperature of the water. Another, somewhat louder, gasp burst from Danica when Jonathon..."
It changes back to Nicholas after that.
Darkniciadabout 11 years agoAuthorYep, that was horrible... A broken record... Ugh.. I don't know how I missed it in the first place, and then my editor missed it as well. I will be fixing that. Totally out of place. Thanks for pointing it out!
Anonymousabout 11 years agoHaha, Danica says she "is starting to feel like a broken record" saying good bye to her friends. I don't mind the occasional editing gaff, but this anachronism was bad, though it still amused me.
