All Comments on 'Danny Ch. 01'

by Just Plain Bob

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Anonymousover 8 years ago

OMG

You do realize your writing erotica and not an episode of the Waltons, Right?

Averygoodlay over 8 years ago

All that

Sugar shit sounds like a street whore talking to a trick.

gordo12 over 8 years ago

I worked with a girl named Pauline French

LOL I wish I had got "her" :-)

bruce22 over 8 years ago

Good Story

This is much less erotic than I would have expected. That is, there are lots of sexual moments but practically no tension unless you buy into his fear of being dropped which all goes back to Amanda. You know, I would have liked to hear what kind of

absurd explanation that Amanda was going to offer for her behaviour.

Anonymousover 8 years ago

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Classic JPB! Keep going!

mike9698 over 8 years ago

good story bob

great to see you writing again.

Samhain8415 over 8 years ago

Damnit bob

It's so good to see you back I just commented the other day if anyone heard from you, miss them loving wives tales you do, I'm sure u got another frank and someone ready to go... Hell do a frank and cookie 2

rightbank over 8 years ago

neither one wants a long term relationship

and are both counting down the days till the other one moves on.

it should be interesting

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