All Comments on 'Day Trip Ch. 02'

Just read the first of these you say is a trilogy & now this one, why? you are a favorite author by a another author & WOW!

Thanks you. It is erotic & sensual! I can't wait to get to the 3d one.

This story NEEDS more chapters, How long are they trapped for? What 'adventures do they get up to? Once back home how do they continue with their liaison?

An exceptional start but more is required.

This excellent story leaves the reader "hanging" at the end, because it is left unfinished. This story deserves many more chapters, as the first two chapters show.