All Comments on 'Daybreak Ch. 03'

I enjoyed this chapter. Keep writing! I can't wait!

was a new chapter! Loving this story! :)

Can't wait for their relationship to begin in earnest.

Very good writing. Keep up the good work.

But I'm waiting for the payoff! :) I like Jameson and Charisma and can't wait to how they get to know each other.

Can't wait to read more. You really know how to capture a reader's attention.

Now Jameson knows what it's like to be jealous. Not so funny now eh? I like his character...he's just so lovable. Can't wait to see what happens next. Thanks!

I really hate it when I see that a female author doesn´t seem to be able to give her female characters at least some sense but makes them look down right stupid! After her first encounter with danger to try to get to her home simply is too stupid to be believed and that angers me. I am not sure whether to go on reading such discriminating stories or not, sorry.

I realize that the last comment was a year ago, but I still feel the need to express my disagreement. The fact that the character went back to her home after being attacked is not really stupid but more like instinctual. When something traumatic happens, your first thought is security, and what could feel more secure then familiar surroundings? I don't feel that this act makes the female lead stupid...simply predictable, since its a very normal reaction to being in a strange place surrounded by strangers regardless of if they swear up and down that they are trying to protect you. Your only thought is that you want to go home, because home is where you feel the most safe.

Keep up the good work..this storyline is very good ♥