All Comments on 'Deceptions Ch. 03'

Now that's a play! Nicely done, very nicely done. Nice of JT to recognize that he didn't deserve Jen and leave her so easily. Jen's gonna be having her some fun now! :)

Best story you have written on here. Every character believable. If you can keep up this level of writing nothing on Lit will compare

I loved the series - wonderful drama, characters well drawn and hot sex scenes. I look forward to reading the many other stories you've written.

Thanks

Brilliant!

You seem to have an unlimited "Imagination".

This story runs the limit of sexual imagination and I enjoyed every moment of it.

Congratulations on the sucessful accomplishment and can hardly wait to read the next one. cdn_ipl@yahoo.com

Just like my comment about Summer, WOW!!! says it all. Thankyou,

You completely captivated me with this story. It is fun, sexy, has an interesting plot, has believable characters... Great story. Please continue with your writing. I look forward to more. I now have read all of your stories so I am looking for more soon...

Loved your characters and story line, you made it flow so well I really enjoyed the reading. Congrats on using your spell checker or a good editor, good grammar and all. Please keep telling stories like this one. I just envy your work, thanks again

Also, I don't think anyone has ever congratulated me for using a spell checker. That has to be a first. :-)

This was a masterpiece, of hot sex !

Totally stupid plot but at least the sex was hot in this chapter. I hoped to see a lesbian 3some. Pity. 4*

Hey Stevieray,

Your writing is stylistically perfect. You're an absolutely skilled writer and reading thede chapters in one sitting has been incredobly arousing. Your characters are beautifully realized anf each one is authentic and so real. The growth of the charscters in relation to the storys events was hougeously told. In short, I loved this so much that I will definitely read it again. Also, gotta say that as a lesbian, it's rare that heyero sex makes me so freaking aroused and madly horny. I was soaked, repeatedly aroused with eavh development. And, I loved it that Jen and Katherine fell in love.

Thanks for a beautifully sexy story, and for the orgasms - I especially loved the orgasms.

Love you, my friend.

The best-developed story on this site, and I've been reading for years.

Keep up the good work for us. And many thanks!

I enjoyed the entire story and the way it was told. Couldn't wait to get to the end I hoped would never come.

Your story telling is really good, I am going to read more of your stories. My problem is that my wife divorced me 4 years ago,to marry a lesbian. We are still friends but my hurt has not went away. I am going to read some more of your stories,because you are an excellent writer and story teller.