All Comments on 'Deep Dive Pt. 01'

One of the best compliments I can give to an erotic story is that it made me want to be there and experience all of it.

Nicely written.

Being a former scuba instructor, I expected a dive story. You, however, made this into a romantic, exciting, and thoroughly sexy story. Great job! Easily five stars.

True people who love sex finding each other slowly, sensuously.

I’ve now read all parts of the series. The style is economic, sensual and highly erotic. You can get enveloped in the sexy world of Julian and Kate, their asides, humour and very sexy fucking. Kate is an enchanting character and, well, no spoilers. Loved it and thank you xxx

Great premise.

Sex begins too abruptly. Every time. And rushes ahead without real details about who was doing what to whom. And lacks dialog during the sex. No discussions about how it felt. And what could feel better. And how to do it better. And do you like what I'm doing?

And anal sex with no preliminaries? No touching? No fingering? No tonguing? And no lube?

Four stars.

5 Stars, nice segway fitting the old girlfriend experience into a story that got his new friend all riled up.