All Comments on 'Devanna Estates Ch. 02'

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This story is so hot that it made me comment for the first time in years of enjoying Literotica. I hope this series goes long!!

Wow, I hope this series goes no for a long time! My first comment too!

Great series

Damn, that was the hotest and best written two chapters I have read on Literotica. The foot worship was amazing, along with the rest of her pummelling of Jake. Please keep those chapters coming. You're a great writer!

Need more chapters for this.

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Very hot story line. I love plus sized women, especially ones that are blessed with big round asses and thick fucking thighs. I hope she turns him into a ass worshiper and a toilet slave and bend his ass over and use a strap-on on his virgin ass.

... And I sure won't have enough cash for the rent... I loved this chapter, especially the way she humbles him relentlessly, claiming ownership of him, submitting him to her feet and pussy, kicking and slapping his face with her bare feet and hands, spitting on his face. That was a great foot worship and facesitting session! She could trample his face full weight bare foot, and feed him some golden nectars too, as these are good ways to strengthen authority. I'm not into "mountains of flesh", so I had to skip some parts, and cream pies and strap-ons would be a real turn off to me.

Please come back for more chapters, that was the most erotic and hottest scene I've read in a loooong time!

Devanna - I'm yours!

I couldn't make it through the whole thing . . . way too erotic for one sitting!

I LOVED the development of Devanna in this chapter and the absolute sensual dominance she commands. Well done!

The characters and dialogue are incredibly erotic I can't wait for the next story.

Both of your stories are amazing. I can't wait for chapter 3. (I know its been six years, but I can dream, can't I?) If there is a woman out there that is this controlling and sexy, please get ahold of me.

You must continue this story!

You've got to write more, we all need more chapters and continue this story.

Excellent writing and hot sexy women! Please come back and write again.

Wish there was more chapters I was looking forward to her REALLY dominating him and wouldn't mind for some of those other girls to come back.

The mind control element are so good, Devanna know exactly when to shoot her words.

Need more!!

Awesome.

This story taps into every carnal lust I have. I beg of the you...more, MORE!!

Please write more of this story, it's excellent!!!

Please please please write more!!!!

Great story!

Dang, it sucks this as never continued. I would love to have seen a whole saga of this young man's descent into being a sex slave.