All Comments on 'Devanna Estates'

Holy shit!. Right out of my own fantasies. The pacing is perfect. Total atmosphere with striking detail. I want to fuck ALL of these women. Great job. I hope it goes on for ten chapters.

this is a very dumb story-only an idiot would write this trash.

they have good apartment for rent and may have girls that are what was described--but no one would want to share someone on the 1st romp...........

Look forward to many more installments

Clearly written by an author with a good vocabulary, and well edited -- BUT, even though there's lots of sex, it's strangely non-erotic; it's just too matter of fact and lacking in feeling and emotion.

with the last commentator that story lacks emotions. The female roles portrayed have no character at all. The autor bestowed them with only flesh, (lots of I would say,) but no soul. It's a shame.

I liked the story alot, great sex, looking forward to where it will go.

Damn that was incredible. You have a gift for writing with a great imagination, and all four women were every man's wet dream...at least mine. Loved all the games. Great story!!

I don't see why more authors don't take your approach.

I'm pretty sure this is every guy's fantasy. It's certainly

mine. Thank you and keep it up!

Loved the intro to the story, fantastic!

Fucking wonderful story, made me hungry for a buxom lady to sit on my face and gave me some wonderful game ideas, lol

Best story ever. Every man's fantasy; group sex with dominant, slightly mature, big T&A chicks that get freaky...but not fetish freaky. A perfect story that needs many more chapters.

Great read well written. Keep going please!

Had this "series" recommended on Forums. Wondered why there wasn't more, until I read this at top of the story...

"Comments are motivate authors to write more."

If you write like that, quit.

Very well written. Awesome sex and the potential for more apartment adventures.

ABSOLUTELY FANTASTIC !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

DELICIOUS ! LOVED THE COMBO - MUSCULAR + MATURE WOMEN !!!!