All Comments on 'Deviant Durga Puja Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

wating for more

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

Very well written. Being a Bengali myself and with Durga puja approaching, this was great. looking forward to the next four days. joy.willingly at gmail.com

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Wow!

Fantastic premise and story! Can't wait for more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

where is chapter 3 & so on? i m eagerly waiting for the whole story

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
A little mistake in the details.

"first the common, nationwide invocation of the Goddess in her military might where she slays the bull faced demon, Mahishasur". Well, Mahishasur is actually buffalo headed. Mahish means buffalo. It must be a male buffalo. The male of many species of animals are referred to as bulls. But commonly, a bull is a male cow. Just a small factual error in an otherwise fine erotic story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Unmatched & Natural

Yes all what i read is happening in real life, since it is India it's not obvious, but factual.

I want every mother to avail this facility, it's her right first before son can take another women in his life.

God luck to all " MOMS "

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
IT IS NORMAL

YES IT IS VERY NICE AND REALISTIC.I AM SURE IF I WERE IN RAGHUS PLACE I WOULD SAME WITH MY SWEET MOM.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
i love this story

very nice story

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