All Comments on 'Dillon Hunt: Before the Fall'

So far, so good!

Meh

God I love this story

Interesting, I like it, keep it coming :))

Can't wait for the next chapter

This must be the beginning chapter. Plenty of room for our hero to be trained. I can just see the reveal on the pink girl. And her slapping on the hero. To make our hero understand that he is below everybody... she could have an aall- out beat down, as training, you know. To help shape him up, you know.