All Comments on 'Discovery'

by moonmullins

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

great story but you switched the names of the step mother and step daughter about halfway through...

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Totally not believable because ...

... I was not present and I know that I did not take part.

Therefore it would be a waste of time bothering to read it!!

Dark_StormDark_Stormalmost 8 years ago
Not the best visual

I think you took the euphemism, "Hershey Highway", a little too literally. The idea of eating chocolate from someone's ass is off-putting. The mental image is too close to scat for my liking.

kumquat69kumquat69over 7 years ago
not scat at all....

The author obviously likes the pure sensual arousal of a woman. Scat is obsessed with the look of fecal matter, smearing, etc. This is not the point of the author's stories, at all. There the emphasis is on the tactile and the scent, and the natural arousal that makes the act of sex such an abiding wonder. The extension of the act to the other portions of a woman's anatomy is an obvious one. The breasts are a secondary, but very important aspect to many men, The look of a round ass in a tight skirt or jeans makes almost all men turn their heads, and rightly so. To go one step further, and include that in your foreplay seems logical and right to me. Different strokes...... Anyway, I like the way the author writes, and thinks.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Delicious

Thank you. Unprepared and different, and just the way I like it. A woman giving herself and a man willing to accept this special gift. It is not scatology, though it borders it and has its mouth on the other side. A risqué moment, a kick, a joy and a mutual expression of deep abiding respect.

What was quite stimulating was the complete absence of artificial lube. That what is offered is pure, it is organic and it is in harmony with nature.

Hope you delight us hungry tongues and flaring nostrils an opportunity to discover the delicious valley of a womans' bum.

Anonymous
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